
Stars, sparkling in the dark skies,
Wind, blowing over, the Aegean seas,
Twilight sets the sleep awakens
Rolling mountains, moon lit heavens!
Sixty-six miles passed ‘n anxiety
How many more, ‘n sobriety!
Yet not an adult, euphoric,
Guided, nurtured, life lessons, hypnotic!
Parents faded, dissolved over time,
Four of family, ancestry, sublime!
Residues of pain, ‘n pathos,
Shadows deep, crimson scars, repose!
My heart beats, ebbing, I hear,
Destination near, yet too far,
Lord, will I hear the whistle,
Or miss the train, ‘n become invisible!!
The gentle breeze over the seas,
Smell of grass roots, cease!
Last solace, beneath the silent glen!
Disrupted by the death knell!!
Very touching. Straight from the heart.
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Thank you so much Mousumi 🤝
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You are welcome!
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Oh my goodness, deeply moving and beautifully written. ❤
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That was deep and simply superb.😊🙏🏼
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Thank you so much 😊 🤝🙏
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Nice to read a poem from you. 🌻
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Amen🙏🌎
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Thank you 😊 🤝
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Emotional poem. Keep it up.
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Thank you and hope you like it 🤝😊
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Wonderful this one Srikanth 🙂
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Thank you so much Vignesh ! Happy you liked it 🤝
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Welcome 🙂
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Really moving! Almost a prayer
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Thank you Luisa for your kind words ! And thank you again for visiting 🤝
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Most welcome! 🙏
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Nice!! Thank you for sharing!
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Thank you Bryan 🤝Happy you like it !
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wow such a beautiful poem Srikanth!!💖💖
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So beautiful lines are full of emotions! The photo is wonderful thank you for sharing 💖🙂🌹
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Thank you for your kind words Priti 🤝🥰
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You are welcome 🌹☺💖Stay happy forever☺
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This is so beautifully penned…tugs at the heart 💖💖
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Thank you so much 😊 I’am honored 🤝🥰
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Wow what a masterpiece, sir! Very very poignant and moving. Loved it! 🙏
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Thank you Sahana ! I feel happy and inspired 🤝🙏
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Very beautiful poem.Thanks . And I happy we will follow each other.
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Thank you so much 😊 glad you liked it ! Thanks again for visiting 👍🤝
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Sure! I’am following you already 👍🤝
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Profound words , touches every rhythm of heartbeat, excellent sir❣️👌👌
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Thank you so much Reena 🤝 your appreciation inspires me and thank you again for visiting 👍😊
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Lovely verse.
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Thank you so much Jeff 🤝😊
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You’re most welcome. Always. ☺️
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Hello Srikanth Your poetry is indeed easy to read and appreciate the stories inside each one. Keep growing your poems as we all get enriched from your mind.
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Thank you so much 😊 I’am very happy you liked my poems and it means a lot to me ! Thanks for visiting 👍🤝
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SRIKANTH; You are very welcome my good friend. Your poems are very well crafted and I enjoyed them. I hope you keep making more of these incredible poems !!
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Sure will do ! Thank you so much 😊 you inspire me 🤝
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You are welcome SRIKANTH !! I am happy to hear I inspire you. II am just being honest with my comments my friend. Keep creating such incredible poems for all of us to read and swallow with our eyes !!
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Wow, Srikanth ! Gorgeously expressed. meaningful and filled with pathos! Amazing poem! ❤
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Loved this! Really great poetry here! ❤
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Thank you so much Carol for visiting and i’am happy you like it 👍🤝
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Thought-provoking, well done! Thank you for following my blog.
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Thank you so much 😊 your blog is also amazing 👍🤝
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💙🪐🙏🏻
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Godhuli time relates with heart touching feelings.
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Thank you Tara for your kind words 🤝🙏
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Great 👍 just , it was so smoothly flowing… felt like a cool breeze passed by me…
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Thank you so much Ankush 🤝 happy for your visit and even more ecstatic by comment 👍😊
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Thoughtful and deeply touching.
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Thank you so much Sunisanthosh 🤝 glad you liked it 👋😊
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